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Revision Analysis

The piece I chose to revise is an example of my least favorite type of essay: the in-class, timed essay. Why are these my most dreaded type of writing? Because I make the most mistakes. Therefore, it was a perfect candidate for revision. What I focused on when revising was, basically, cleaning it all up. When I write fast, I [...]

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After (corrections are in blue) : In the Time of the Dark Romantics: An Analysis of The Scarlet Letter and its Relation to American Romanticism The literary movement of Romanticism began in the nineteenth century in the wake of the Industrial Revolution. It demonstrated a casting off of urban society and an appreciation for spontaneous [...]

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Before:  In the Time of the Dark Romantics: An Analysis of The Scarlet Letter and its Relation to American Romanticism             The writing form of Romanticism began in the nineteenth century in the wake of the Industrial Revolution. It demonstrated a casting off of human society and an appreciation for spontaneous feelings, intuition, and untainted [...]

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